CAE formal letter - (Wise Owls group)

Here are some sentences from the formal letters that you wrote for homework. Can you spot the mistakes? Is the register formal enough? Make any appropriate improvements.

1. In addition, he was the responsible of the trainees.
2. He has a deep experience in teaching.
3. When it comes to teach young people, he manages to keep students motivated.
4. Furthermore. he is a really good public speaker.
5. She uses to spend a month each year in an English speaking country.
6. That's one aspect that I think it would be recommendable to take into account.
7. I have known Sergio for eight years, more or less.
8. I think that students will not get bored in his classes, it is more, they will find them very enjoyable.
9. In my personal opinion, he is a very close person.
10. This openness to new places and cultures might come very useful.
11. He is a self-reliant character who is used to face multiple challenges.
12. ... so he would be capable to control different groups of children.
13. ...so I consider I know her pretty well.
14. Whatever the child wants, she makes any effort to satisfy their wishes.

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