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Essay Errors
Here are some sentences from your essays that contain one or more mistakes. Can you find them and correct them?
- I have nightmares from one month ago.
- I walked on the streets looking for help.
- It is the only one thing I can do.
- She decided to call to the few friends that she had.
- She arrived to the park and she sat down in a bank for to smell the spring.
- ... and only she had met three persons in six months.
- He was by far the worst person into the prison.
- ... and when the others policemen notice my escape, I'll be in other country.
- He screamed and screamed but nobody listened him.
- Some months ago an old friend rang me up. I didn't know about he for ages.
- ... and I met her a day after in my house.
- One day he told to his father that he was in love with her.
- Most of people who have seen it, like it.
- I don't like so much scary movies.
- In the film there are some terrified scenes.
- He lives every day frightened.
Comments
You don´t give up hope........
You are the hardworker¡¡¡
I think you look great in your kilt.... It´s more clair and easier to understand " You are uuuuauuuu¡¡¡¡ Isn´t it?
I hope we can be happy about our exams, because you are really exigent and we need you give us more puntuation......
These exercise about essays are very difficult, I´ll answer one or two and I´m not sure of them..
1.- I´ve had nightmares for a month
3.- It´s the only thing I can do.
10.- Some months ago, an old friend rang me up. I hadn´t known about her for ages.
11.- And I met her, a day after, at my house.
12.- One day, he told his father that he was in love with her.
I need a big rest and two points more in my exam after doing this exercise¡¡¡
C U ¡¡¡
It is difficult to remain hopeful. At times I despair....
...because you are really DEMANDING and we NEED YOU TO GIVE us more MARKS.
1. I'VE BEEN HAVING NIGHTMARES for a month. (the nightmares started a mmonth ago and I still have them so we use Prst Perf Cont)
10. I HADN'T HEARD FROM HER for ages.
11. ..and I met her A DAY LATER at my house. (After is always followed by a noun or a verb)
You corrected 3 and 12 well.
Thanks again for the wine. I really appreciate it.
Have a good weekend.
What was your weekend like?
The mine wasn´t bad. Thank you¡¡
Don´t despair¡¡¡¡
The wine is from everybody and We don´t need you to give more marks,because we have the maximum... Don´t we?
It was a joke......
Try to be a bit good¡¡¡
C U ¡¡¡
MINE wasn´t bad.
I enjoyed a nice bottle of wine.:-)
And the exam results were generally quite good in the end.
You should be happy with yours.
Have you drunk a nice bottle of wine alone? I hope you would have shared it, with a good company¡¡
I´m happy with my exam, but with my teacher..........
What could I tell you that you don´t know???
I´d like Ghana win the World Cup and Spain can be near...¡¡
I don´t know how we could eliminate to Portugal, Brasil, Germany, etc...
But I can have a dream for a time... Can´t I?
C U ¡¡¡
I look forward to doing these essay errors exercises tomorrow. There are very interesting.
I think that all area all right, I have to stady them slowly.
Lucía.